It's a pleasant but bittersweet Sunday morning for me right now - as I was putting this post together, I learned one of my uncles just passed away after a lengthy struggle against cancer. It's news that hits home even more given that I'm a cancer survivor too, and he and I actually went in together one day at the hospital, back to back, to see our oncologist.
I'm saddened, and the news left me reeling... but life goes on anyhow, and we all gotta do what we gotta do to move along.
So I'd already signed up for Six Sentence Sunday, and I didn't want to leave anyone in the lurch (and also not put up my link up when I signed up, which to me, amounts to giving my word).
Last week, we were in that hotel room in Marseille, this couple in total lust against the velvet-panelled wall. Heat flared up, fast. Will they follow upon this fire that blazed... give in to their desire for one another...? Read on for today's six:
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Bracing his hands on her ribcage, he pinned her to the wall. She understood what he wanted, and in the blink of an eye, her legs came up, brushing feverishly against his hips, then straddling his waist. Standing like that, his body aligned with her core, and with a none-too-gentle push, he swiftly entered her.
Even with her face buried in the crook of his collarbone, he heard the moan she tried to stifle. Her soft, velvety lips trailed up his skin to settle on the pulse beating frantically in his neck. Her tongue darted out to caress the throbbing vein, and she rocked her lower body against his. ...'
Thanks for coming over, and double thanks if you leave me a comment. You know these little words you leave me tide me into the week, right? :)
Don't forget to check out the other Six Sunday posters here - I guarantee there are some amazing reads in that list.
Hope you're all having a lovely Sunday.
From Mauritius with love,
Zee
51 comments:
'Her soft, velvety lips trailed ..' beautifully written six!
Sorry to hear about your uncle. Hugs
A HOT six! Well, the entire story is hot and a great adventure. :)
Thanks Alix. :)
And thank you, Jessica, aka this story's No1 fan :) xoxo
So sorry for your loss.
Nicely steamy six; like how in tune with each other they are.
(And thank you for recognizing who Aidon & Stef are based on!)
Z-SO sorry for your loss. Thank you for these 6. Great writing.
Thanks Taryn.
Yup, these two are definitely two lovers reuniting, hence why they're in tune. :)
I love that storyline you're pursuing - can't wait to see how you'll write it xoxo
Thanks Rebecca :) Nice to have you over
My condolences honey. You have my shoulder any time you need it.
And now, O.O Hot scene!
Graylin
I'm so sorry for your loss.
I love your very HOT six!
Really sorry to hear about your uncle. {{Big Hug}}
Loving this six! Very sensual.
Zee, sorry to hear about your uncle. Your six this week is sexxxxy, though.
I sorry for you loss hon! ((hugs))
Wonderful six, though. Super hot!
Beautifully written scene, just restrained enough. You're quite a trooper to post after such news. My condolences. Take care.
I can see and feel this scene, so well done.
My uncle died last year - just as we were getting closer too. My sympathies to you (and huge hugs)
Thanks Graylin. I guess we all don't realise yet that he's no longer with us... Sad
Glad you liked the scene though :)
Thank you, Cherie *hug back*
Thanks, Gem. Yep, sexy 6, innit? :)
And thank you, Layna. :)
Thanks Jessica. I admit I debated whether to post, but I know the right thing, the real tribute, would be to get on with life. :)
Thank you, Sue. I know what you mean - we were starting to get close too, our common brush with cancer putting us together beyond that line that only patients cross. Hugs back :)
Oh, Zee, blessings to you and your family. Thank you for coming through on your word. Your six was smokin' and loved that they were too far gone to deal with foreplay. Well done. :)
Sizzling!
My heartfelt condolances for your loss and you are right... life and writing does go on.
I enjoyed the six, keep writing on.
Zee, I am so sorry for your loss, and what a bond the two of you must have had. I almost feel guilty commenting on your six, but i will tell you, girl, it's HOT. ((hugs)))
I like him more and more with each of your posts!
And we pretty much can picture what happens next! ;) LOL
Zee, how lovely! And the beautiful way you described her mouth on his throat--masterful, sweetheart.
I'm so sorry about the bad news you received today. I send you a tight and long ciber-hug.
HOT! Very, very hot.
Hot and intense six! Great imagery here :)
Evening, Zee. I'm sorry to hear about your uncle. I just lost mine a few months ago. It says a lot about you that you still put together your post and took the time to comment on others; and as always, your six is wonderfully written and easy to sink into. Sweet, sensual and simple. Great six.
Whew!! Got me all hot and bothered! Loved it
Dayyuuummm...that's HOT, Zee! I love it! Can't wait for next week! Happy Sunday!
You never disappoint Zee...very sensual and sexy..loved your six :)
So very sensual! Well done!
Thanks Siobhan. :) Yup, too far gone indeed.
Glad I went through with the posting - grown addicted to SSS *hugs*
Thanks Misa :)
Thank you, Jayel :)
*grin* Sarah. Yes, it was a unique bond, and I'll cherish that always.
Glad you liked the six :) xo
Lol Lex - he's very 'likable' :)
Lol Aimee - indeed! The scene concludes next week :)
Thank you, Guilie. Hugs back
Thanks Krystal :)
Thank you Mirriam. Glad you liked it :)
Jalisa, sorry for your loss too. That kinda resonates all through you, innit?
Glad you enjoyed the excerpt. :) Hugs
Thanks Tmonique. Nice to see you over here :)
Lol. Thanks Stephanie. The scene concludes next week, so stay tuned for that 'ending' :)
Awww, thank you Christine *hugs*
Thanks Vivien :)
So sorry about your loss, Zee. It is never easy to face these challenges in life.
But these six certainly make up for that. They are smokin'!!! Hot and passionate - very evocative. Well done as always, sister xoxo
Thanks Angela *hugs*
Glad you could come over, sweetie. XOXO
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