Six Sentence Sunday

Hey peeps

For a while now, I've been following this bandwagon where authors post six sentences of their WIP on Sundays. If I'm not mistaken, Six Sentence Sunday just celebrated its first anniversary. I thought this was a cool idea, to have a little tidbit up every week, so you guys get to see what we're working on.

Here's mine, and please bear in mind this is my first time at this so I'll prolly mess it all up. *grins*

The following lines are taken from my current WIP, a contemporary romance, and happen at Chapter 3, where the heroine is looking at the hero while they're together in a car.

Enjoy!

"...He had lost all traces of youth.
Had he lost his heart too? Right then he didn’t look human. No – he was the real avenging, fallen angel now. So beautiful it hurt. What had happened to him, to the boy she’d known, who had made her believe there was beauty in the human soul?..."

Let me know what you think! :)

From Mauritius with love,

Zee